A Camel Limerick

[calissa]

Last night my partner teasingly challenged me to compose a poem in his honour. He started to get a bit alarmed when my face took on that blank expression which suggests I'm thinking hard about something. This is a *slightly* more polished version than what I originally came up with. I should note that my partner has an inexplicable fondness for camels.

Concrit is always welcome.

A Camel Limerick
There once was a lovely young camel
Whose soulful, dark eyes were untrammelled
His coat was most fine
With a beautiful shine
He was truly the handsomest mammal.





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Comments

[darakat]

I liked it.

[calissa]

Thank you! Limericks are always so much fun.

[raze]

Hee. This is silly and fun.

[calissa]

I enjoyed it and Sahaquiel was totally delighted :)